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5) Shakespeare’s use of language within this scene was written with impeccability. In the commencement of this scene Shakespeare ingeniously drops the metaphorical approach that Romeo and Juliet used to use to talk about their love and replaced it with true, meaningful and tender words signifying their leap to maturity; however, metaphors were used in other ways making his writing that much more potent. One thing we found particularly unique is in the past Romeo and Juliet use the light and sun to represent their felicity, but in this scene Romeo actually says “"Morelight and light- more dark and dark our woes” which evidently represents something of negativity, so Shakespeare somewhat switches the uses of their metaphors. He also proved his amazing way with linguistics through using Juliet’s speech while talking to her mother to hide the fact she loved Romeo as it was conveyed in such a way that it portrayed the message she objected him.